Hi Amanaki, I really love the start of this piece of writing because of the way you used descriptive language..cold,dark night,,it made me want to read on!And you have remembered to keep using describing words in the rest of your writing to keep it interesting - ka pai!
Hi Amanaki, I really love the start of this piece of writing because of the way you used descriptive language..cold,dark night,,it made me want to read on!And you have remembered to keep using describing words in the rest of your writing to keep it interesting - ka pai!
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